Jen Bervin’s Nets

English: Title page of Shakespeare's Sonnets (...

English: Title page of Shakespeare’s Sonnets (1609) (Photo credit: Wikipedia)

Jen Bervin’s book “Nets” (Ugly Duckling Press, 2004) deserves to be written about more. It is a book of genius on so many levels. I know that the use of that word – the dreaded word “genius” always seems quite hyperbolic but in this case it fits in a very practical sense if we are to get at the heart of what she has done. I think we need to frame this review in the meanings that are teased out of this word in the broadest sense to get at what this review needs to do.

Each page of her book is a sonnet from Shakespeare with the text of the sonnet in light grey lettering a few selected words and/or phrases bolded to form a new poem. It is an astounding work of bravado. In her working note in the back she says that she “stripped Shakespeare’s sonnets bare to the ‘nets’ to make the space of the poems open, porous, possible – a divergent else-where.” It is a completely re-imagined vision of a text and a subversion of “The Canon” or the Textus Receptus. She goes on to say that “when we write poems, the history of poetry is with us, pre-inscribed in the white of the pages; when we read or write poems, we do it with or against this palimpsest.”

From Merriam-Webster’s Collegiate Dictionary:

: a very smart or talented person : a person who has a level of talent or intelligence that is very rare or remarkable
: a person who is very good at doing something
: great natural ability : remarkable talent or intelligence

It is important to understand what she is doing with this book. Bervin is a poet and what she is going to do is take the work of another poet and erase it. She is going to take some of the most well-known and beloved poetry in the west and deface it. She is going to scrape the ink away leaving a selection of words of her choice. Or maybe a selection of words that can only be chosen by the work. That is what we have to decide. It takes a talented, remarkable and rare person to do what she has done – she has taken the sacred words of Shakespeare, the great Mighty Whitey, and had the balls to erase, subvert, and negate.

:a plural genii  an attendant spirit of a person or place
:b plural usually genii a person who influences another for good or bad

It is as if she understands how he has haunted poetry for the last 500 years. These words are untouchable. They are handed to us on brass tablets. And not everyone really gets to discuss them: one has to have gone to the right schools to have anything relevant to say about the received text, yet Bevin’s work calls into question the entire nature of the acceptable text. The poetry, the haiku, that she excavates from Shakespeare’s text are little works of genius in themselves that must be read.

Sonnet 55 becomes:

Not marble, nor the gilded monuments
Of princes, shall outlive this powerful rhyme;
But you shall shine more bright in these contents
Than unswept stone besmear’d with sluttish time.
When wasteful war shall statues overturn,
And broils root out the work of masonry,
Nor Mars his sword nor war’s quick fire shall burn
The living record of your memory.
‘Gainst death and all-oblivious enmity
Shall you pace forth; your praise shall still find room
Even in the eyes of all posterity
That wear this world out to the ending doom.
So, till the judgment that yourself arise,
You live in this, and dwell in lovers’ eyes.

She curates the brilliant lexicography of Shakespeare with her own peculiar inclinations, imbued with her own character and weltanshauung:

: a strong leaning or inclination penchant
: a peculiar, distinctive, or identifying character or spirit the associations and traditions of a place
: a personification or embodiment especially of a quality or condition

The genius of this work is that at a different time, a different age, a different view, different poems would be elicited from the text. But I think that is one of her points in doing this – the palimpsest – the scraping away of a text to create a fresh meaning, to layer text upon text over time creating a new work of art that casts the old in a new light and suggests new directions. Genius as a spirit of time and place, as well as the gifts of the writer, are quite apt here.

 

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Definitions of Fluxus

Chortodes fluxus

Chortodes fluxus (Photo credit: Wikipedia)

“1) Fluxus makes the mundane magical.
2) Fluxus happens when one feels that life and art must be taken so
seriously, that it becomes impossible to take life or art seriously.
3) Ordinary acts and ordinary objects perceived in extraordinary ways.”

From the Fluxus Blog by Allan Revich

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An old friend…

A character from a favorite novel comes into the room and observes the action. Does he or she say anything? What would he or she think of the situation? (Alice from “Alice in Wonderland” or Immanuel Goldstien from “1984.”)

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Humiliation

Think about the most humiliating thing that happened to you in your teen years, now write about it as a memory for one of your characters. It no longer belongs to you — it is not real, it is now a fictionalized account. You are finally free. Isn’t being a novelist fun?

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The Queen of Bohemia and the Professor

Queen Anne de Foix-Candale of Bohemia and Hungary.

Queen Anne de Foix-Candale of Bohemia and Hungary. (Photo credit: Wikipedia)

Are sitting across from you waiting for you to answer their question. You either did not understand the question, did not hear the question, or weren’t paying attention. You do not want either of them to think  you did not understand, or that you weren’t paying attention. The professor drums his fingers on the table. The Queen of Bohemia looks over at the setee impatiently. What do you say?

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Go out for Chinese Food

Order tea, enjoy the food. When you are given the fortune cookie, save the fortune. Imagine a character with this fortune who becomes angry when reading it, why is he or she so angry? What coincidence did the fortune play on? What action will he or she take when the realization of this anger becomes apparent to them? Be sure to write about your experience as the author of going out for chinese food.

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Draw a box.

Decide whether the act of drawing a box is meant to exclude or isolate. You may put things in your box or leave things out of it. This chapter is a description of inclusions and exclusions.

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Word for the day

Frederick James Furnivall, editor and philologist

Frederick James Furnivall, editor and philologist (Photo credit: Wikipedia)

This part of the story is completely consumed by one word. This word may fill the day with incredible significance or it may point out how tedious the mundane world can be. Maybe that tedium has an incredible significance. Open the dictionary at random. Put your finger down at random. Look this word up in different dictionaries, writing down the definitions. Find a copy of the Oxford English Dictionary at your library and find the history of the usage of this word. Now write this chapter using this word as the starting point. Create new definitions and new words.

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The queen of bohemia

She is the Queen of Bohemia. The Professor looked at her when she was 6 years old, held her hands up to the light, and pronounced “This woman was born to be a performance artist.” She is beyond Bohemian. The word “Bohemian” is only the automatically opening door into the megastore of creativity and artistic expression that she possesses. She is a poet, a painter, and a high liver. She has 360,000 frequent flier miles from the astral plane. Charon calls her “kiddo.” She is a Cancer with an Aries rising. When she throws the I Ching it is always 64.

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